In article <1190126713.494541.72390@[EMAIL PROTECTED]
>,
Lyo**** <iridix@[EMAIL PROTECTED]
> wrote:
> Hello. I looking for native english speakers and asking for help...
> I'm not native english speaker, but I want to make my game text as
> smooth as possible (well perceived). Please help me.
You might also try alt.languages.english
> How to play:
> Open doors
Open doors.
> to move
To move
> forward through
> maze
the maze
> Collect golden keys
Collect golden keys.
> One key opens
Each key opens
> one door
one door.
> Choose your way
> carefully,
> if you haven't
> enough keys,
> you become lost
you may become lost
> in the maze
in the maze.
> If you lost,
If you become lost,
> you may try
> level again.
the level again.
> Select in-game menu
> and choose
> 'Try again'
> Try another path.
To try another path.
> Good luck!
>
> Congratulations!
> You have completed
> the game!
> ..Brave Dany
> saved the princess
> and returned her
> to the magic land
to the magic land.
>
> - - -
>
> Gwerk was exiled
> to the far, far
> mountains...
>
> Milena with Dany
Melena and Dany
> married,
> and live long in hapiness..
and lived a long and happy life together.
> But that's is not
But that is not the
> end of our story!
>
> Play the sequel of Dany adventures!
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